#8 end of writing 1

1)    Thanks for our English Writing class, I improve some skills. For example, at the “ten minutes writing,” I write 141 words at first, but I came to write over 200 words at last writing. At some of the class in autumn, I sometimes stop writing because I didn’t come up with what I want to write. But the number of word I wrote is increase gradually, and at the first practice in January, the score improve dramatically. 

This is that my fluency of thought and writing in English is improved, and the mistake about grammar is getting less, I think. Another thing I learn is the rule of paragraph. If I did not take this class, I would write sentences with no indent. Even when I took the entrance examination, I may have made paragraph with no indent. I think most of us had learned grammar - how to make sentences - but have not learned how to make paragraph. So this lesson about paragraph is very important for us to make English document (this skill will be helpful for us.)

2)　　　In next semester, I would like to learn how to write official things like an e-mail to our teachers or reports. Sometimes we should send our homework to teacher, but it is not clear while the contents of e-mails were polite or rude. I want more knowledge to write because rude documents make our impression worse. So I want to come to be able to write politely and in right way.